I just wrote this on a whim. It's a short story, idk, I've heard different opinions on my short stories, but I quit writing them around 9th or 10th grade. This isn't edited or anything, and it's very rough, what I want to know is should I continue/build a story from this?
In the silence of her dark bedroom, she prepared for her nights rest as though nothing was amiss. She took her hairbrush in hand, he expression, to those who did not know her well, was one of calm indifference. Just as she was tying off the braid she habitually wore every night, a familiar male figure appeared in the doorway. He saw through her veneer of normalcy, partially because he knew her so well, but mostly because no one could be calm or indifferent after what he's done to her.
Subject: continue? 
