Cae

yay i finished something : D
i will finish the "I Shot the Maid" picture REAAAAAAAAAAL soon : D cause i'm cool like that

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and for those who don't remember/know, Cae is the main character of my comiccc :3

thanks you two :3

The nose and forehead are disproportionately low, but I simply adore the hair and the lips. Especially the lips. So kissable...

i don't know what you mean by that and i;ve been trying to figure that out : P if you would care to explain i'd like that lol

but thankyou! you sound like one of my friends, whenever i put lipstick on she comments on how my lips look super kissable lol

I'm bad with explaining stuff without a visual reference, so here, I made you some redlines.

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Basically, you should make the forehead more inclined and the nose a bit more protruding. I'm guessing it's your style, which is absolutely great, but without making MORE ANGLES it'll look flat!

lol! i'm likin the craziness, it's k

but in my defence that's actually a bow on a headband (and since it;s a headband it's placed before the crown so it's placement is right, being behind the bangs), not horns.

Athe hair at the roots are able to be lifted a little bit, they don't lie perfectly flat on the head, so her hair is able to look a little poofier which i guess would make it look like her forhead isn't inclined and it';s all hair.

but the point isn't to see the forhead since she has the straight-across bangs, it would hide it from view : P

i wouldn't change the nose actually, i probably would just have made the jaw and lips jut out less.

(i'm sorry if i sound too forceful, my art is like... my baby, and if my baby is critiqued i will defend it with all my might :3)