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The Wanderer
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 |  Subject: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 6:16 | |
| Please put all comments here... I will include a FAQ soon to answer any questions. | |
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Ashaon
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 7:51 | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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Random : The beatings will continue until morale improves!
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 9:39 | |
| US News... yeah no, please don't.
As for the other stuff, overall I'd recommend some humor, actually lots of it. Biasing it is also nice. Instead of saying 'invasion from the Worthbeads Empire' be like 'UNLAWFUL AND UNSCRUPULUS INCURSION BY THE MIND BLOWINGLY STUPID GOAT FUCKER WORTHBEADS' or something like that. When you're trying to make something like this, it needs to be funny. | |
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Ashaon
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 10:05 | |
| We don't want another Fox News. We have Fox News for that. | |
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Day of Light
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 12:19 | |
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TSDZ_President
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 14:10 | |
| I thought it was typed well, at least, seemed somewhat realistic when you take into account the fact that this is your first "news" experience.
Now for constructive criticism:
Make it longer.
Have more information.
Typically news cast don't quote themselves. | |
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The Wanderer
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 19 Jul 2011 - 15:34 | |
| - Ta]R[SoNiS wrote:
- US News... yeah no, please don't.
As for the other stuff, overall I'd recommend some humor, actually lots of it. Biasing it is also nice. Instead of saying 'invasion from the Worthbeads Empire' be like 'UNLAWFUL AND UNSCRUPULUS INCURSION BY THE MIND BLOWINGLY STUPID GOAT FUCKER WORTHBEADS' or something like that. When you're trying to make something like this, it needs to be funny. It's not to be entirely funny, its to state shit that's going down here. - TSDZ_President wrote:
- I thought it was typed well, at least, seemed somewhat realistic when you take into account the fact that this is your first "news" experience.
Now for constructive criticism:
Make it longer.
Have more information.
Typically news cast don't quote themselves. I intend to make it seem almost like a Newspaper soon, but right now I'm just trying to get HOW i'll do it for now, a few more articles may be added Friday | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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Random : The beatings will continue until morale improves!
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Fri 22 Jul 2011 - 5:55 | |
| Well if you're trying to state shit that goes down, don't make the realphobia part more cryptic. And really, it's boring unless it's funny.
MAKE IT FUNNY :RAGE: | |
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Rarity
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Random : I will love and tolerate the shit out of you.
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Fri 22 Jul 2011 - 7:25 | |
| Yes, this isn't a serious and professional news thing where you get paid.
Make it funny. | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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Random : The beatings will continue until morale improves!
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Sun 24 Jul 2011 - 8:22 | |
| I should totally do the financial report. | |
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Day of Light
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 10:56 | |
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Capricorn Hunter
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 12:10 | |
| I love how you happened to start the interviews the weekend I wasn't home -_- | |
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We Tigers
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 12:53 | |
| I am a newscaster, I cum in yours news, I don't give a fuck.
inb4 what | |
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Capricorn Hunter
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 13:03 | |
| You're an idiot. Just thought you should know that. | |
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We Tigers
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 13:05 | |
| but I love you  | |
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TSDZ_President
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 13:14 | |
| But Victoria! We already know he's an idiot! We need to use new insults, or he'll just get used to it! | |
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Capricorn Hunter
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 13:20 | |
| Yeah, I know.
(That was to both of you by the way.)
And I love you too Nik. Tough love ; ) | |
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We Tigers
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 17:08 | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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Random : The beatings will continue until morale improves!
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 19:53 | |
| Why would you interview your reporters?  | |
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The Wanderer
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 26 Jul 2011 - 20:53 | |
| they werent reporters when i was interviewing them ;D | |
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Ashaon
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Random : Who knew bridges could be such incredible killing machines?
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Wed 27 Jul 2011 - 5:35 | |
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NeoDrac54
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Wed 27 Jul 2011 - 16:01 | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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Random : The beatings will continue until morale improves!
| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 9 Aug 2011 - 14:56 | |
| Updates? I honestly started to like it. | |
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CaR_HoPPeR
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 9 Aug 2011 - 15:03 | |
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Rarity
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| | Subject: Re: COMMENTS Tue 9 Aug 2011 - 15:17 | |
| Bullshit, I've seen him on at night. | |
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