BookWorm Member
Posts : 2920 Join date : 2010-02-08 Age : 32 Location : Minnesota
| Subject: Always, Baby Fri 16 Apr 2010 - 16:56 | |
| So I think I write more poetry during school than anything else... I'm on a major senior slide, I'm amazed I even write lol anyways.......yeah another poem (this one rhymes!) Always, Baby
Day after day I hide behind a smile, I try my best to seem like a girl with the heart of a carefree child behind my façade I hide from the world
"Why bother?" I hear you faintly ask. You mean no harm by it, I understand. I just stare back at you, through my mask. But when you see the look in my eyes, you grasp my hand.
Suddenly your visage takes on a new dimension. You examine my face anew. Your thoughts have ceased, your mind in suspension, I hear you murmur, "I never knew…"
I have nothing to say, so silent I remain. I can tell you are worried, and unsure what to do. Finally I whisper, "You must think I'm insane." "Never, baby, never," you assure, "I love you." | |
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Zentaku Member
Posts : 10438 Join date : 2010-01-09 Age : 32 Location : the place between ultimate despair and pure bliss. Random : With time all things change and all people change. Nothing is constant.
| Subject: Re: Always, Baby Fri 16 Apr 2010 - 17:16 | |
| *hugs* I Love this poem! Great Job! ^_^ :...I also approve... | |
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BookWorm Member
Posts : 2920 Join date : 2010-02-08 Age : 32 Location : Minnesota
| Subject: Re: Always, Baby Fri 16 Apr 2010 - 17:17 | |
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CaR_HoPPeR Member
Posts : 6833 Join date : 2010-02-01 Age : 29 Location : California Random : The sand is rough and coarse and it gets everywhere.
| Subject: Re: Always, Baby Fri 16 Apr 2010 - 18:25 | |
| Nice, shows everybody's shyness in a poem.
-Stamps a "Good Job!" on Liz's Forehead-
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Day of Light Admin
Posts : 6526 Join date : 2009-12-23 Age : 27 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Always, Baby Fri 16 Apr 2010 - 18:44 | |
| I hereby proclaim this poem to be awesomeness. | |
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BookWorm Member
Posts : 2920 Join date : 2010-02-08 Age : 32 Location : Minnesota
| Subject: Re: Always, Baby Fri 16 Apr 2010 - 19:42 | |
| thanks ^_^
I contemplated adding another stanza...but opted not to... | |
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