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BookWorm
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PostSubject: Always, Baby   Always, Baby EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010 - 16:56

So I think I write more poetry during school than anything else...Razz I'm on a major senior slide, I'm amazed I even write lol

anyways.......yeah another poem (this one rhymes!)

Always, Baby

Day after day I hide behind a smile,
I try my best to seem like a girl
with the heart of a carefree child
behind my façade I hide from the world

"Why bother?" I hear you faintly ask.
You mean no harm by it, I understand.
I just stare back at you, through my mask.
But when you see the look in my eyes, you grasp my hand.

Suddenly your visage takes on a new dimension.
You examine my face anew.
Your thoughts have ceased, your mind in suspension,
I hear you murmur, "I never knew…"

I have nothing to say, so silent I remain.
I can tell you are worried, and unsure what to do.
Finally I whisper, "You must think I'm insane."
"Never, baby, never," you assure, "I love you."
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PostSubject: Re: Always, Baby   Always, Baby EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010 - 17:16

*hugs* I Love this poem! Great Job! ^_^

Always, Baby Icon_farao :...I also approve...
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PostSubject: Re: Always, Baby   Always, Baby EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010 - 17:17

*hugs back* thanks ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Always, Baby   Always, Baby EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010 - 18:25

Nice, shows everybody's shyness in a poem.

-Stamps a "Good Job!" on Liz's Forehead-

^^
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PostSubject: Re: Always, Baby   Always, Baby EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010 - 18:44

I hereby proclaim this poem to be awesomeness.
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PostSubject: Re: Always, Baby   Always, Baby EmptyFri 16 Apr 2010 - 19:42

thanks ^_^

I contemplated adding another stanza...but opted not to...
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