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The Wanderer
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 |  Subject: G.F.S. Oblivion Sun 6 Jun 2010 - 19:02 | |
| here is part 1 of 4 pieces of G.F.S. Oblivion  0blivion PLEASE comment and all artists please comment ;-; i want to see how good i am | |
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Bestdragon3
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Sun 6 Jun 2010 - 19:35 | |
| Use a finer writing utensil, erase overlapping lines, go for proportions if your doing a ship, and do an overall clean up before scanning. One helpful trick I learned is to erase the white spaces as well as it makes it look shinier. | |
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The Wanderer
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Sun 6 Jun 2010 - 19:56 | |
| I wanted to go over it again and rescan it but grandpa was like noooooo and i was like -.- damn it | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Sun 6 Jun 2010 - 20:20 | |
| Less guns? The 'modern' sci fi depictions for ships tend to like a variety of weapons and different systems because there's a new type of person who does not follow the storyline and just watches star wars going 'OOO PRETTY COLORS'!
In other words, some of those cannons can be made into rocket launchers, guns that don't resemble any modern weapon, lasers, and whatnot. | |
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The Wanderer
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Sun 6 Jun 2010 - 20:24 | |
| o.o hmm you actually have a good point for once o.o | |
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Mon 7 Jun 2010 - 8:32 | |
| Quite Sloppy to say the least.
though It has to make sense in some degree, IF the 2nd cannon on top of the 1st explodes, the whole turret would explode. Though it puzzles me on the side, there's small barreled turrets while the right side has long barrels. Plus Tar's Right, it can't just cannons...it could photon missles or something that is advanced......It is a huge ship full of big guns right?
so basically all it's lacking is Variety, Detail and Neatness. | |
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Mon 7 Jun 2010 - 11:08 | |
| I don't know alot about guns, but I know plenty about drawings, and this well...
In sight of maintaining certain personal relations, the only thing I'me saying about this is that you should use your eraser better, like the III after GFS on the right side.
Now I could start a rant about how this drawing...no, not even finishing that sentence...
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The Wanderer
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Mon 7 Jun 2010 - 12:47 | |
| thanks dwaggy  also that III are 3 layered shield batteries so yeah basicle since it has 12 shield batteries it has 12 shields. | |
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Dwaggy
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| | Subject: Re: G.F.S. Oblivion Mon 7 Jun 2010 - 14:18 | |
| The III after the GFS on the right side shows trough the gun thingy, you didn't erase it enough
*resists urge to start rant*
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