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Bestdragon3
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 |  Subject: A Poem Tue 31 Aug 2010 - 15:08 | |
| You
Your voice is like a gentle breeze
Whose kind tones bring me to my knees.
Your face is the greatest art
Which sparked my once silent heart.
What was once small, feeble, and quiet
Is now strong and beating with might.
For now our hearts aren't yours or mine
And with a great feeling that's so divine
Our hearts are one and together
With our love lasting forever.
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Zentaku
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Tue 31 Aug 2010 - 20:35 | |
| *intently staring at screen and reads*..........*done* That was beautiful Tim! :Dx87 *glomps best* you are awesome at this ^_^ | |
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BookWorm
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Wed 1 Sep 2010 - 22:41 | |
| I gladly take the blame for this, but give all the credit to Best... awesome work dude ^_^ | |
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Icekitten
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu 2 Sep 2010 - 12:29 | |
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Bestdragon3
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Ashaon
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu 2 Sep 2010 - 15:21 | |
| Her art is NOT crap! >  | |
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We Tigers
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu 2 Sep 2010 - 15:25 | |
| I can rhyme too,
It's not only you,
This line is true,
Keep on trying,
I'll keep on fighting. | |
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TSDZ_President
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu 2 Sep 2010 - 20:31 | |
| fail...
I speak this way to prove I'm cool,
why can't you rhyme, you stupid fool?
with every word, I pound you down,
striking deeper into the ground.
all in all, rhymes are all the same,
and I must say, they're kind of lame. | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu 2 Sep 2010 - 20:50 | |
| Win...
This is a poem.
Because I am calling it one.
You will hate me because I am not rhyming, being different, and an asshole.
You are right to do so. | |
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We Tigers
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu 2 Sep 2010 - 21:12 | |
| Poems Suck,
Go fuck a duck,
Yes this rhymes,
All good times. | |
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Day of Light
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Fri 3 Sep 2010 - 15:37 | |
| Alright, people, please appease,
You all really have to face this up,
'Cause your poems are really just cheese,
And you really need a chocolate cup,
Of shut the fuck up.
Phew.
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Icekitten
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Fri 3 Sep 2010 - 16:23 | |
| I need to stop reading
because my brain is bleeding,
with all the different voice.
When i'm done i'll rejoice,
but i'm not even close.
So with my medicine i'll take an extra dose.
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Ashaon
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Fri 3 Sep 2010 - 16:27 | |
| Haikus are easy But sometimes they don't make sense. Refrigerator.  | |
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TSDZ_President
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Fri 3 Sep 2010 - 16:39 | |
| - Hinaoki wrote:
- Alright, people, please appease,
You all really have to face this up,
'Cause your poems are really just cheese,
And you really need a chocolate cup,
Of shut the fuck up.
Phew.
one good reason why this fails as a rhyming poem: you need syllables that match, IE: your poem is fail, it's low on the scale notice how each have 5 syllables (lol, I'm just messing with you Hina) but I'm being truthful at the same time. | |
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Ta]R[SoNiS
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| | Subject: Re: A Poem Fri 3 Sep 2010 - 17:21 | |
| Damn this thread.
It's messing my head.
That's a poem.
So is this:
My favorite color
is blue
Anyway, SHUT YOUR FUCK UP | |
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