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inMadness
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 |  Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 17:32 | |
| ... I'm feeling so bold as to perhaps use a combination of both Banvora and Car's ideas.
Anything specific you'd like to expand on your ideas before I start brainstorming.
For example:
How old is Yia?
What sort of activity when on inside the Asylum/Camp? | |
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The Wanderer
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 17:34 | |
| Yia is 13 now, try to read his history its on page 6 of this thread. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 17:41 | |
| Generally Experiments, with not done well into their "standards", Extermination by Gun Squad for a quick death or the old school slice/dice torturing. Limited food and contact to most people. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 17:50 | |
| Hmmm..... Well, if you can think of a general character you'd like to play I can put him in somewhere. | |
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inMadness
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 17:57 | |
| - CaR_HoPPeR wrote:
- Generally Experiments, with not done well into their "standards", Extermination by Gun Squad for a quick death or the old school slice/dice torturing. Limited food and contact to most people.
Im probably going to adhere to yours a little, more specifically spending a time in the same facility. Whether I accually know your character is open to discussion but at this point its a tie.
I would've gone for the bully thing, Sam but my character would barely be eighteen at most for me to tie in with yours. He's a little young and I wanted to be in my twenties at least.
Anyways ill probably post a character soon, so im open to scrutiny when I do. I plan on also submiting a character I make from scratch as an alternate. Basically the favorite gets the role. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 18:05 | |
| -Shrugs- It'll work to fill the hole in Emir's past, since all of the patients had separate rooms and most of them died. xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 18:40 | |
| Heheheh, lets see who you'll make, inMadness. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 20:32 | |
| My character (Alevon) went to college for like fiveyears, your character could have been a classmate of his perhaps? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 20:47 | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 20:49 | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 20:56 | |
| Lol see?
So inMadness got anything yet Ed? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 21:01 | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:25 | |
| Alrighty everyone, here is my first crack at a character. I happy with it so far, but am open to suggestion. Name: Udo WeberGender: MaleAge: 23Looks: 6'2"; 185lbs; medium build; shaggy blonde Hair; Blue eyes; rounded yet gaunt face. Typically wears loose clothing (t-shirt, blue jeans) Personality: Quiet, Stoic, Loyal, BluntPower(s): Geokinesis (5) [Can manipulate the earth.]Negative(s): extended use presents a risk of DNA degeneration, resulting in petrification. Petrified cells pose little danger to Udo's life other than they cannot be restored. The use of his power is garunteed to cause petrification; when it eventually spreads to vital organs, he will die. Job: Pro-Am F1 Driver (currently free-agent/hiatus) History:- Spoiler:
Udo Weber was born in Giessen, Germany on April 27, 2021. The small bustling market town located securely in central Duetchland, was a tourist hot-spot. It was a place of fun and excitement and the occasional citizen lost in their drink, but not for Udo. His mother died during childbirth, his father; gunned down during World War III when he chose "life" as a soldier instead of death as a traitor. A choice to fight for survival instead of dying a martyr. A strategy that was unsuccessful. Only a month after being deployed his body was returned to his pregnant wife with a crisply folded flag. She lost her will to live after that. She went into labor weeks early and succumb to her grief during birth. Udo would never know how close to death he neared in those first crucial moments, as doctors and nurses scrambled to keep him alive. He was lucky to have been so fully developed; his time in the nursery was short lived and he was delievered safely to his new home.
Udo spent his childhood at Monikahaus in Frankfurt, a few hours north-east of Giessen. Udo was a sickly child and as result he was sent away to a secret and unknown facility. He had been told that the place was a hospital where he could be made well. They began a series of odd treatments where he'd recieve a daily dose of antibiotics, or so he was told. For years, he felt as if he was getting worse as he continued recieving injections; however, treatment was ceased not long after he turned sixteen. His condition improved dramatically after that, and since has been a picture of health. The boys home was a nurturing and loving enviornment, but as was his misfortune, Udo was never adopted. For eighteen years he watched all his friends, and then his new friends, and some of his newer friends as well, find the families that they all desired. The day after his eighteenth birthday and the party the orphanage threw for all the children that shared the same birthday as Udo, he was given his birth certificate and the reins to his life.
Alone in an unforgiving economy and with no connections in the outside world, Udo did the only thing he could do. Find trouble. He was an active pick-pocket and car theif; he made a easy living of stealing and conning innocent people out of their valuables. A wild car chase and a six month sentence in prison garnered him the attention of Ralf Schumacher. The racing legend was in his sixties, yet through those aged eyes, he saw a driver with a mean streak. Not unlike himself. After Udo served his time, Ralf wasted nothing in finding and taking Udo under his wing. The pair bonded quickly as Udo learned of a different light to the adreneline he craved. For the first time in his life he felt like he found a family.
Udo rose through the ranks quickly under the watchful eye of his mentor. His career flourished but after only three short years, Udo hung up his helmet and retired. The racing community was awestruck but recieved no warning nor explanation to Udo's mysterious disappearance.
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:29 | |
| Sweeeeeeeet character!!!! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:30 | |
| WALL OF TEXT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *holds head in pain* | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:34 | |
| - Banvora Ascernia wrote:
- WALL OF TEXT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *holds head in pain*
lol, i told ya i could put up some text. with this much info I am Udo Weber, Muahaha! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:40 | |
| Can you at least... like... make it smaller? D: | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:42 | |
| - Banvora Ascernia wrote:
- Can you at least... like... make it smaller? D:
lol, sure, but would you rather be scrolling or squinting? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:42 | |
| >< damn you D: fine ill read it when im not busy D: | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Fri 26 Nov 2010 - 23:49 | |
| i think i have a safe middle ground. the history is now safely hidden in a spoiler tag for those interested to veiw in detail. ^^ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Sat 27 Nov 2010 - 0:00 | |
| Also - TSDZ_President wrote:
- You should pick more then one ability.
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inMadness
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Sat 27 Nov 2010 - 0:02 | |
| - Banvora Ascernia wrote:
- Also
- TSDZ_President wrote:
- You should pick more then one ability.
according to the guidelines for B-Type characters, Im only allowed one ability with, up to ten ?evolutions? of that ability. It didn't go into detail on the evolutions though. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind (OOC) Sat 27 Nov 2010 - 0:05 | |
| ah so you just payed 6 of them? | |
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