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| | Subject: Re: Fight to Remember Mon 7 Mar 2011 - 18:41 | |
| - bestdragon3 wrote:
- I liked how you wrote the story, but there was no real intro. You just dove straight into it lol. It may just be me, but I ask a lot of questions. For example, my big ones were, why is he there? And why is he fighting Naruto?
Last thing though, Naruto should have died. But, that's just a personal hatred towards him, and the fact that my characters could eat him 
*Cough, Elements* This is a new style of writing I wanted to try out, I didn't really mean to jump right into it without a little background behind it. - Spoiler:
Which is why that will be fixed in the second Fight to Remember.
Why is he there and why fighting Naruto?
I'm not really sure myself since I was inspired to type this fight from a song I was obsessed with ^^; | |
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