Curious Love

Curious love

So there's this girl,
and there's this boy.
And this girl thinks
she loves this boy.
So she tells him.
He rejects her.
She cries all night.
But finds that there's
this other boy.
He's sweet, kind, and
romantic, he
says he loves her.
He means it with
all of his heart.
She says she loves
him, she means it
with all her heart.
And happily,
together, they
live forever.

*sniff* great story

thx, the first part is based on personal experience, the second im hoping will be

yeah hope .........(still not over event from first )

the event in my poem or ur life?

That's very pretty! Although it's a bit, ah, choppy. You could make it rhyme and split it in stanzas. I also would like to see each line a little longer (eep, I'm so very picky).

I think its good

You and colin will be best friends history ^-^