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 |  Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 22:01 | |
| He doesn't answer, just laying there as hypothermia sets in, unmoving
after a few minutes, he thinks
...I worked for three years so she and I could be together in peace...and so everyone can be happy...and then I...
He gasps
......she.....is happy....with him...and everyone else as well...am I the only one suffering from this......I suppose I am....so...it seems my plan worked after all...
He sighs in sadness and content
....I did make it a slightly brighter world for everyone to live in...e....even if I'm not happy...they are...and that's all that matters...though I'm not done yet.........but what's the point... | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 22:32 | |
| TK was sweating slightly as she laid asleep. She was breathing heavily and unsteadily, gripping the covers slightly every so often and mumbled something incoherently. She was dreaming of the man who she once referred to as a mere illusion. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 22:38 | |
| When TK awakens, there would be a note neatly placed on her pillow
It reads:
"I loved you more than anything, and still do.
...but do you still love me?
- Alevon"
There would be a freshly cut rose laying with it
(he's still outside, btw...though his joints are frozen solid, so he can't move (confirmed by Best)) | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 22:47 | |
| A tall man in a trench coat with a hood comes closer to Alevon nearly tripping on him as he didnt notice him. Looking to see what he stumbled apon quickly relizes it a person and takes off his coat picking Alevon up and wraping him up with it.
Has he starts looking around for some shelter and finding the entrance to the base useing his vision starts running toward it reaching it and entering shutting the door behind them. "Wow, you sure are lucky I happen to find ya." Saying Maxim as he hastly searched for a heat source.
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 22:50 | |
| Alevon replied slowly and shakily
"...let...me...go...." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 22:59 | |
| "Sorry cant do that, its not the person I am." repling to Avelon as he reached the kitchen opening up the stove turning it to bake and stripping Avelon of his clothes all but his underwear to let his body absorb the slowly rising heat.
Sitting Avelon in front of the stove watching for any improvements. Asking " What were you doing out there any ways?" turning on his thermal vision to see his body heat. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:00 | |
| He is abnormally cold...should be dead but isn't
"...I was..."
He starts
"...I don't know..." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:06 | |
| "Well whatever it is it cant be that important to lose your life over.
You got the rest of your life to live and experience different things so get over the past and go towards the future." Said Maxim as he sit down beside Avelon "Hey whats your name anyways?" | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:08 | |
| (It's ALEVON)
"...unless it's the only thing I have to live for..."
He looks down
"...my name is Alevon...you would probably know me as the mass murderer...hated by most of the world..."
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:21 | |
| " You young types and your emotions these days." as he took a long sigh.
"Alevon?, I thought you were dead." sounding a little surprised as he leaned his head back on the the counter behind him.
"By the way have you ever seen some of your best friends die before your eyes and you cant to any thing to help them." looking serious "I live with the guilt cause i have relized that I cant to anything to help it but deal with the bagage so I advise you do the same."
"But you seem you going though a hole diffrent thing entirely so please tell me what it is it the best thing for you right now. ....Besides the heat.
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:23 | |
| "I killed one of my friends."
He says flatly
"...the best thing...I don't know, honestly..."
(dude...his name is Alevon, not Avelon) | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:28 | |
| "One question then, Why?
turning to look at the poor wreck | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:35 | |
| "Why did I kill him? Because he always lied to me...even when I tried to help him...I was ordered to kill him, and so I tried to save his life, but he tried to kill me in the process...so I killed him....."
He says, staring at the floor | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:43 | |
| "Would a friend lie? would a friend attack his "friend" ? I wouldnt think of him as a friend if he did that to me. Friends are some one who could be trusted and looked to for help." getting up reaching a hand out to help Alevon up seeing his heat was at least normal.
"You shouldnt dwell on a friend that backstabs you every chance he/she gets to infact I would call them enemies if they do that." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:46 | |
| "...even so..."
He gets up
"...there are too many paths layed before my feet...and all of them closed off...I don't know what to do..." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:53 | |
| Shutting the stove off and looking at Alevon "Well thats life for you, the only thing that I can say is take the one that you think is right. Some people dont have that chance. Now come on Ill help you to a bed so you can rest." Picking Alevon up with ease and starting to head down a hallway finding a empty room and placing him into the bed. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sat 6 Nov 2010 - 23:55 | |
| Alevon phases through his grip before he can pick him up
"...I'd preffer that you stop that...and I don't need to rest...I never do..." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:09 | |
| Seeing the action as a sign of rejection "You know its alright to accept help every once in a while. But its my fault for not introducing myself." Clearing his throat and holding out a hand "My name is Maxim Tolstoy or Alloy I do not care which you call me. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:12 | |
| "...oh...right...you don't know..."
Alevon straightens himself and sighs
"...I'm Ryan...or rather, Ryan was me...I don't feel like explaining it..." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:18 | |
| "Seriously." looking at Alevon seeming a little shocked.
"I hope you know what TK went through when she tought you died. Besides what were you doing in the snow outside? I havent got an answer for that yet." crossing his arms expecting a answer this time. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:20 | |
| "...I saw her...kissing someone else..."
He slumps to the floor
"...I did everything I did so we could be together...and she doesn't even want me anymore..."
He is looking at the ground with a blank expression | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:28 | |
| "Well... I cant blame her but you should try and get the her side of the story. There is always a reason for these things so before you kill yourself and leave her indefinitly talk to her. Relationships can always be mended as long as you talk to each other.
as Maxim starts thinking to himself "Man I'm a soldier not a therapist." | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:31 | |
| "...I hurt her...I know I hurt her...but it was but a side effect of what was really going on...I appologized, and I thought she accepted and still loved me..."
He begins shaking again, curling up into a ball on the floor | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:41 | |
| Maxim puts his hand on his face letting out a sigh shaking his head "Wow, you are a mess well i have to options for you 1. Stay there laying like a useless pile of junk getting in everyones way. Or 2. GET ON YOUR FEET AND DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT CAUSE DOING NOTHING SURE IS HELPING EVERYONE RIGHT NOW!"
Smashing his fist on a near by counter top making a loud crash and a good sized hole in it. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Fragility of the Mind Sun 7 Nov 2010 - 0:43 | |
| "...she's asleep...I don't want to wake her......and that's also why I was out there.....so I wasn't in anyone's way..."
He stands up and slowly walks back to the door that leads outside | |
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